*bows to the fic* Whoever you are, your story takes my breath away. I await to see how everything works out.
Also, I love the way that you write Evil Ben. Having him gently caress Jim like he "loves" him, even though he treats him like a possession. And Jim in this state just breaks my heart. He's so vulnerable and hurt and desperately wants to get out of this relationship.
*gets down on one knee* Please don't be creeped out but will you please marry me?
Re: Fill: Unprompted: [RPF] Larry/Jim, Ben/Jim NC-17 (violence, non-con later on) 7b
Date: 2011-11-27 02:05 pm (UTC)Also, I love the way that you write Evil Ben. Having him gently caress Jim like he "loves" him, even though he treats him like a possession. And Jim in this state just breaks my heart. He's so vulnerable and hurt and desperately wants to get out of this relationship.
*gets down on one knee* Please don't be creeped out but will you please marry me?