*bows to the fic* Whoever you are, your story takes my breath away. I await to see how everything works out.

Also, I love the way that you write Evil Ben. Having him gently caress Jim like he "loves" him, even though he treats him like a possession. And Jim in this state just breaks my heart. He's so vulnerable and hurt and desperately wants to get out of this relationship.

*gets down on one knee* Please don't be creeped out but will you please marry me?